Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Survival Convincing Paragraph

Is food truly the most important aspect of surviving alone , or is there something more essential to the surviving of humans, like perseverance? Without perseverance you will simply loose your will of staying alive. If you don't decide to keep going even if everything is going against you, you will simply loose, and nothing will ever change that. Surviving is like a game, that's between you and nature, and you play by nature's rules. The only way you could win is by never giving up no matter what comes your way. If Brian didn't have perseverance he would have never went to the plane and spent hours piercing through stubborn steel, that eventually led to his rescue. If Chuck didn't have perseverance he would have never built the raft to sail in the unknown, dark and dangerous waters of the Pacific, that also led to his rescue. So, without perseverance they would have never been rescued. And therefore perseverance is the only true key to survival.

1 comment:

  1. I think that this is a really good paragraph. Great job monica! :)

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