Monday, January 23, 2012

Convincing Paragraph

Having a sharp object can mean the difference between life and death when trying to survive. A sharp object is important because it can be useful in many situations – it enables you to be resourceful. For example, in the movie Cast Away, Chuck wouldn’t have been able to cut open the coconut if he didn’t have the rock with the sharp edge. In The Hatchet, Brian was able to complete almost all of his life-saving tasks with the hatchet. You can’t cut down a tree with your bare hands! In daily life we have so many things that are essential to our lives, but machines make most objects. When you are in the wilderness, you need to be creative and use what is around you. Having a sharp tool enables you to make better use of your environment. That is why having a sharp object is the most important tool of survival.

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