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Without perseverance you have no hope of surviving alone.even if you have food and water it will eventually run out and you would die.But with perseverance you will have will to find more food and keep your self alive.In the movie Cast away When Chuck was trying to make fire he had a lot of difficulties but he kept on going and ended up with warm place to sleep and food to eat.But if he did not have any guts to fail and retry he would have killed him self or died eventually.