Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Convincing Paragraph

If you were stranded all alone in the middle of nowhere, self determination would drive you to fight for survival. Determination is the most important component of survival because it will always keep you going. If you are determined to find something, you won't stop until you have it. In Hatchet, Brian is determined to get fish, and even after missing numerous times his perseverance pays off and determination wins over. When he is making a fire he tries many different things that don't work. One technique he used was to make a nest of finely cut bark. He cut the bark for two hours, which took great determination, and in the end it results in fire. Survival is about trial and error, and if you stop trying after failing once, you'll never stay alive. Even if you fail over and over again, determination will lead to success and survival,

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